The
Return to Rome
(NLC, 433-83; CA, II, 1126-1225)
Duane Graner
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Gower composes this part of Constance’s tale with distinctive
touches that deviate from the details of Trevet’s story, with Gower’s
scene being over 620 words long:
As a part of God’s design, Constance’s three-year
exile at sea culminates with her ship approaching a massive armada.
Her ship drifts among and between the crafts, eventually stopping
under the main vessel. The lord of this fleet observes Constance’s
boat and commands his men to descend into it and see what it contains.
Constance attempts to hide from these naval officers for fear of being
discovered, but they uncover the mother and her son and take them
to the inquisitive lord of the fleet, who interrogates her about where
she came from, who she is, and what her religious beliefs are. While
she divulges that she is a Christian, she prevents the lord from knowing
too much about her. She reveals only that her husband ordered her
and Moris to go to sea. After telling the lord that her name is Couste,
she resolves to restrain her speech and not say another word about
her situation. The lord then asks if Constance wants to join him
on his voyage to Rome. After accepting his offer enthusiastically,
Constance learns that the lord has just been waging a war against
the treacherous murderers in Barbarie who had many years earlier killed
Constance’s Roman companions and set her adrift; the lord’s forces
killed the Barbarie murderers, but nobody knew what happened to Constance.
Then, the lord’s identity emerges in the story: he is a Roman senator
who is married to Heleine, Constance’s cousin. Upon their arrival
in Rome, the lord entrusts “Couste” and Moris to the company of his
good wife, who is happy to have this new companionship. Twelve years
pass as Constance lives with the lord and his wife, and, while no
one ascertains her identity or high status, all of the citizens show
her love.
Gower’s account of Constance’s return to Rome bears some
resemblance to Trevet’s depiction of the scene. At the same time, however,
the differences between Trevet’s and Gower’s versions are significant
and merit further examination. Gower’s alterations of the scene lend
insight into what he attempts to achieve through his retelling of Constance’s
journey. Specifically, Gower accentuates the ominous as Constance approaches
the naval fleet, turns the discovery of Constance into a more harrowing
situation, initially withholds expository information about the Roman
senator’s character, and stresses the intense effort that Constance makes
in restricting her own speech.
One major change that Gower brings about in his version
of Constance’s tale is the addition of an ominous tone that surrounds
the moment in which Constance comes upon the naval fleet. Trevet had
undercut any real sense of dread in the moment that Constance caught sight
of the naval fleet by portraying God as a considerate and well-meaning
guide. Thus, Trevet’s depiction of God kept the presence of the approaching
sailors from seeming too menacing as he guided Constance towards them.
Also destabilizing any portent of doom was the hopeful sight of the city
and its harbor. The presence of the harbor—a place where ships could
claim shelter from the tumult and unpredictability of the ocean—symbolically
represented the notion that a positive end was in sight for Constance,
especially when one considered the juxtaposition of God’s benevolent guidance
alongside the harbor’s physically reassuring presence. In Gower’s reconstruction
of the scene, however, Constance drifts not toward a harbor but into the
midst of an array of ships. He thus places Constance in a disconcerting
environment. The image of Constance sailing between the naval vehicles
evokes the alarming feeling that a massive and powerful force is overshadowing
her. The unsettling sensation becomes intensified as her boat stops directly
underneath the imposing flagship. Furthermore, Gower sets the scene in
open sea as opposed to locating it within sight of a harbor or a city.
His change of location communicates the idea that just as Constance is
far away from a safe port, she is also at a distance from stability and
security by being on the ocean—an unpredictable and unsteady environment
in which anything can happen. Finally, Gower complements the scene’s
ominous nature by being somewhat ambiguous about God’s role in directing
Constance. Though Trevet clearly indicated the compassion and protection
that a kind God showed to Constance as he guided her toward the harbor,
Gower portrays God in a more neutral and indistinct manner by stating
that Constance’s ship drifts among the naval fleet “as god wolde for the
nones” (CA, II, 1130). Here, Gower casts God in a far less reassuring
light than in Trevet’s version, an alteration that in turn creates uncertainty
about why God is directing Constance toward these ships.
Gower’s changes to Trevet’s story are not arbitrary or
superficial. They are a means to a specific end. While the tone of Constance’s
approach in Trevet’s tale was comparatively uncomplicated and mostly free
of tension, Gower intensifies and darkens his story. He implements revisions
to infuse his tale with more dramatic tension while simultaneously preventing
it from becoming essentially one-dimensional in its positive atmosphere.
Not surprisingly, this kind of dramatic movement is consistent with his
other major changes.
In both tales, Constance makes contact with a band of
sailors. Trevet’s narrative did not reveal any fear or apprehension on
the part of Constance as she encountered the sailors, nor did it allow
for anxiety to build between the approaching sailors and Constance. She
exhibited no internal apprehension, distrust, or any other adverse reactions
to their presence. Even though Trevet’s Constance possessed “tresour”
[“treasure”] (NLC, 442) of which the sailors took notice, the presence
of these riches did not provoke a disturbance, quarrel, or conflict between
Constance and the men. Gower’s depiction of the scene, on the other hand,
evokes a threatening aura as the sailors accost the seafaring Constance.
Obeying their lord’s orders, a small handful of sailors board Constance’s
ship, compelling the fearful woman to “hireselven hide” (CA, II,
1142). The inclusion of the sailors’ descent into Constance’s boat conjures
foreboding undertones. The sailors’ invasion of the boat creates the
unsettling feeling that Constance’s space is being violated by a group
of men. Gower points to Constance’s anxiety of violation and the possible
menace that these men pose by illustrating her fearful and defensive reactions.
Whereas Trevet’s Constance did not hide from or even balk at the idea
of making contact with sailors, Gower represents Constance as an individual
who feels compelled to take evasive actions to protect her well-being.
The fact that Gower shows the men bringing Constance out of her boat to
the lord’s flagship builds upon these fears of violation. In this moment
when a group of strangers remove a reluctant and frightened Constance
from her familiar surroundings in order to take her to their territory,
Gower escalates the anxieties of the woman’s possible exploitation at
the hands of unfamiliar men.
Because of the nature of the changes that he makes to
the story of Constance, Gower is able to add depth to his tale and to
his protagonist. By having the sailors descend into Constance’s ship
and take her away without communicating with her as they had in Trevet’s
story, Gower not only imbues his tale with increased dramatic tension
that prevents his narrative from succumbing to utter simplification, but
he also provides dimension to the character of Constance. While these
men ultimately do not violate or otherwise harm Constance, Gower shows
her reacting to them in a fearful manner that did not appear in Trevet’s
tale. Thus, Constance’s defensive hiding is indicative of her anxiety
over her situation. Although Constance showed no appreciable signs of
trauma or upset in Trevet’s version, Constance’s frightened hiding in
Gower’s tale suggests a growing aversion to the abuse and mistreatment
that she suffers over the course of her journey. In short, these changes
give more definition to the narrative and to Constance’s apprehensive
psychological state.
Another significant change to Trevet’s literary vision
occurs as Gower takes Trevet’s character Arsenius and initially withholds
expository or identifying information about him. Trevet had immediately
revealed a great deal about Arsenius as soon as Constance met him. When
Constance was brought before Arsenius, Trevet not only showed that Arsenius
was an intelligent and commendable “chivaler” [“knight”] (NLC,
447) as well as a Roman senator with whom Constance was familiar, but
he also revealed that he was a trustworthy figure because of the affectionate
bond he shared with Constance’s father while serving as his advisor.
Trevet thus kept suspense from surfacing in his story by unambiguously
revealing Arsenius to be a trusty and dependable individual. Alternatively,
Gower does not provide information about the Roman senator Arcenne when
he emerges in the narrative. In fact, he does not reveal the nature of
Arcenne’s occupation or even his real name until well after Constance
encounters him on the sea. Gower withholds any revealing information
in the interests of presenting the lord as an enigmatic figure who may
not be wholly trustworthy. Since Gower reveals nothing about Arcenne,
the senator’s question about Constance’s faith and his offer to take her
to Rome make him seem initially more suspect and questionable than in
Trevet’s work. An uneasy air of ambiguity surrounds Arcenne; his enigmatic
introduction provides no clear indication of his disposition, traits,
or intentions.
I have indicated above that Gower’s changes are not merely
cosmetic in light of how they carry out a deeper function and serve as
a means to a structural end. His decision to withhold expository information
about Arcenne is no exception. Whereas Trevet’s immediate divulging of
Arsenius’s positive qualities had resulted in the unambiguous delineation
of the senator’s character, which in turn made this part of the story
relatively uncomplicated, Gower initially makes him a suspicious figure.
Gower raises the dramatic tension and suspense of this scene by plunging
the reader into a state of uncertainty about the senator’s true nature.
Ultimately, Gower’s conscious decision to envelop Arcenne in a shroud
of mystery allows him to keep this scene from exhibiting the bland simplicity
that marked Constance’s meeting with Arsenius in Trevet’s version, thereby
making this scene more dramatic.
In one of Gower’s most important changes, he reshapes
Constance’s behavior as she strives to hide the truth from Arcenne. Trevet’s
text depicted no clear signs of emotional or psychological distress—anxiety,
nervousness, or overwhelming concern—on Constance’s part as she answered
the senator’s questions about herself. Through his portrayal of Constance
as an individual who wielded wisdom as she answered Arsenius’s queries
without divulging information about her “linage ou de l’emperour” [“lineage
or the Emperor”] (NLC, 454), Trevet illustrated the composure and
constancy that were the fundamental and dominant aspects of Constance’s
character. This show of mental durability was consistent with the way
his Constance exhibited no lasting signs of trauma from the various trials,
horrors, and injustices she experienced. While Constance’s discovery
of Hermegild’s dead body caused her to express a brief display of “grant
affrai” [“great alarm”] (NLC, 231), for example, the effects of
Constance’s alarm were fleeting and manifested themselves nowhere else
in the text.
Gower, however, alters the way Constance avoids telling
Arcenne any details about her life in order to reveal the psychological
effects of her perilous journey. Throughout the tale, he makes a variety
of aspects of Constance’s character available. For instance, as the story
begins, Constance’s brave conviction and enthusiasm shine forth as she
encounters “the greteste” (CA, II, 599) of the Barbarie merchants
and “hath hem with wordes wise / Of Cristes feith so full enformed, /
That thei therto ben all conformed” (CA, II, 606-08). Also, an
exile-bound Constance displays melancholy and a fear of the future as
she uses a “milde stevene” (CA, II, 1056) and prays to God to “‘Tak
of thi wofull womman rowthe / And of this child that I schal kepe’” (CA,
II, 1060-61). In these examples one can see how Gower is interested in
changing Trevet’s story in order to flesh out Constance’s character.
In the scene in which Constance talks to Arcenne, Gower makes similar
changes to her character’s depth as he alters Trevet’s representation
of a constant and unflappable Constance. As the scene unfolds, the language
illustrates that Constance wants to impose forceful restrictions over
herself, lest the slightest fragment of information concerning her past
should slip out and expose her identity:
Sche wolde him nothing elles sein
Bot of hir name, which sche feigneth;
Alle othre thinges sche restreigneth,
That a word more sche ne tolde.” (CA, II, 1166-70, emphasis
added)
While Constance answered “plusours demaundes” [“several
questions”] (NLC, 452-53) and maintained her composure in Trevet’s
narrative, Gower forms a relation between Constance’s verbal restrictions
and her anxieties about being discovered. That is, when we consider Constance’s
physically evasive and frightened tactic of hiding herself from the probing
sailors’ sight and observe a parallel in her verbally evasive manner of
“hiding” her words from Arcenne’s ears and refusing to say “a word more,”
Constance’s highly defensive way of speaking then appears to derive from
her fear of being discovered. Such a fear of being exposed through her
speech is consistent with her anxiety of being exposed on her boat. Consequently,
that Gower makes Constance less talkative and more protective of her speech
transforms Constance from a stable and calm individual to an anxious and
troubled one.
What purpose does it serve for Gower to institute such
changes in the main character of this story? Constance’s internal conflict
corresponds to the other modifications that I have described above, in
that Gower’s changes infuse the tale with more dramatic depth and dimension.
Constance’s predominantly unflappable nature in Trevet’s story did not
allow for much dramatic tension. Gower designs a fleshed-out and fully
dimensional portrait of Constance with the intention of adding depth to
both the story and to his main character. As a result, his story contains
an insightful psychological portrait of a woman who has lived through
a number of fear-provoking circumstances, which in turn makes his story
and protagonist more profound.
Aside from the major revisions I have described, the
minor changes that Gower makes in depicting Constance’s return are worth
brief mention. Some of these alterations relate to Trevet’s depiction
of Helen, Arsenius’s wife. Trevet revealed Helen to be a remarkable woman,
an individual of complete “seinteté et bounté” [“holiness and goodness”]
(NLC, 482). Trevet also designed his narrative so that Arsenius
and Helen declared Maurice to be their heir. Gower does away with these
touches by merely describing Heleine as “a good wif” (CA, II, 1215)
and by eliminating Trevet’s detail about Arsenius and Helen selecting
Maurice as their heir. Considering how Gower’s other changes push for
a movement towards intensified dramatic tension and depth, it appears
that he makes these two revisions so as to prevent Trevet’s details from
compromising the dramatic tension that he wishes to achieve. The superlative
nature of Helen’s holiness and the undeveloped bestowing of the title
of heir upon Maurice may strike Gower as overly sentimental and ideal
simplifications that work against his deeper and more nuanced characterizations
and plot structures.
These same motives compel Gower to revise Trevet’s description
of the aftermath of the Saracen slaughter. In Trevet’s version, Arsenius
informed Constance that while the emperor’s men killed each of the “unze
mil” [“eleven thousand”] (NLC, 468) Saracen murderers who
had slain Constance’s Christian companions, none of the emperor’s Christian
warriors died or received injuries. The outlandish scenario of one army
utterly wiping out another army and emerging completely unscathed counteracts
Gower’s push for dramatic depth due to its overwhelmingly idealistic outcome.
Accordingly, in his depiction of Arcenne’s army triumphing over the bloodthirsty
Barbarie men, Gower downplays the details and indicates that none of the
Barbarie fiends “from the swerd alyve passed” (CA, II, 1186).
Once these minor alterations are in place, Gower can construct a stronger
and more cohesive work that adequately accommodates his major changes.
In the end, by creating an ominous atmosphere as Constance advances towards
Arcenne’s fleet, constructing the discovery of Constance in a more suspenseful
manner, temporarily withholding expository information about Arcenne,
and showing the extent to which Constance will go to restrain her speech,
Gower generates a higher level of dramatic tension and instills substantial
depth and dimension not only in his tale, but in the remarkable protagonist
as well.
Originally Posted: April
4, 2006
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